IF THERE'S This, THERE'S More

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    IF THERE'S This, THERE'S More
    If there's this
    There's more
    If time doesn't stand still
    And the quill of wish doesn't transpire
    There's still more

    When I called
    I didn't know how well
    It works
    Asking Gods minion to inspire
    And you did

    Maybe I can't go to your school
    But still I am
    Still I can
    If there's this
    There's more

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    freind commented on IF THERE'S This, THERE'S More

    07-02-2009

    very nice yes there is so much more to look . to look up above to know there is more . take what you got and deal with it. pull out your true feelings and let your spirit fly. nice job
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    Grito commented on IF THERE'S This, THERE'S More

    05-05-2009

    That's right, there is always more.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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