TIRED

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    TIRED
    Tired of it all
    the problems
    the solutions
    the ways and means
    the cleans and purges
    the right the left
    the up and down
    the round and round
    down the hole i go
    tired of it all
    i pale
    i sail
    i fail
    tired without heaven
    this earthly trip
    would be without reward

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    arfin09 commented on TIRED

    02-28-2009

    nice! appreciated the graphic imagery. 123 punch summary "i pale, i sail, i fail" taking pen(pencil?) to paper is healing.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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