IF YOU LOVE ME

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    IF YOU LOVE ME

    I want you to know
    among today and tomorrow
    whispering in your ear
    at the magic sea
    being wet from your breeze
    with your sweat and fine fingers
    carrying you on my chest
    near the fire
    everything carries me to you
    colors, lighted stars
    sweet dreams toward those sailboats
    reflecting our bodies in the brilliant moon

    Well, now
    if as an angel of the moon, you love me
    and with the shinny sun
    you become mine
    only if you love me 
    be near me
    walking through the fire 
    with your hand holding mine

    If suddenly you decide to leave me
    if perhaps
    you feel that you are not able to hold on
    and, if you  think that is to hard
    that day, in that moment
    I shall lift my arms
    I will hold you tight
    walking through the path
    of God's crystal mirror to
    our neverland

    If you love me stay with me
    if you love me just look at the sea
    and find ourselves
    if nothing is extinguished
    or forgotten
    if you love me please don't leave
    you are my destiny, you are for me
    in this magic world and eternal dream

    Only if you love me.

    AIXA



     

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    optimistic commented on IF YOU LOVE ME

    07-23-2009

    Its like an ocean washing away a seashell at shore yet never floats away what passion there is in love what a beautiful feeling it brings and how you brought it out on this poem is great.
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    AIXA

    08/08/2009

    When I read your poems, I feel nostalgic feelings like the most famous blues.

    laydbak1 commented on IF YOU LOVE ME

    07-23-2009

    This works so much easier and pretty in English... I ran your Spanish version through a translator, and it was a bit broken up on the actual thoughts... I guess if you're fluent enough in Spanish it would read just as nice... Good job....
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    AIXA

    08/08/2009

    Thank you for your comments. Good point.

    azizndarku commented on IF YOU LOVE ME

    07-18-2009

    THIS IS A VERY INTRETED STORY THAT REMINDS ME WHEN I WAS A THE SCHOOL AND ONE OF MY CLASSMATE WROTE THE SAME THING BYT SHE LATER WENT OFF FROM THE SCHOOL WITHOUT MY CONCERN
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    AIXA

    08/08/2009

    Thank you, that's why the poems exists, to reach you down deep in your soul.

    Grito commented on IF YOU LOVE ME

    06-18-2009

    Adrift on this sea of comfort, love you is the only thing I do.
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    wildpendigus commented on IF YOU LOVE ME

    06-15-2009

    I really like this poem it too would be a very nice song too, maybe latino jazz, I would like to to reply to my response and also comment on my poems also. grecowong@yahoo.com
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    AIXA

    06/17/2009

    Sure, I will be interested to get together and make my poems into songs. Let me know how. And I already reviewed your poems.

    wildpendigus

    06/22/2009

    Let's get together andturn the poems into songs, well I do production in music and write also I'm a musician

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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