I'm a Human Being

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  • Death

    I'm a Human Being

    This is one of god’s creatures in the tree
    Why do you want to have a fire fight with me

    I’m a Human being

    I am a boy on the ground dead God
    Please don’t let them take me down

    I’m a Human Being

    Fruit rotting on the trees
    Land of such complexities
    Hot light flickering through
    Blinding heat of the morning sun
    Trench Mouth determination
    Day Begun

    I’m a Human Being

    O’ my God hit the ground
    Can’t you see that Gook in the tree

    I’m a Human Being

    Fire Flashed Rat a tat tat
    Spraying death all around
    Legs and arms flying
    New thudding sounds
    Blood soaked eyes
    Dying cries

    I’m a Human Being

    Frenzies tension happened so fast
    Grabbed my weapon Rat a tat tat
    Branches flew back
    Dead man in the tree

    I’m a Human being

    A blood shot tear was shed
    Fruit rotting on the trees
    Only the black grandioso black worms
    could I see
    `
    Something’s gone inside of me
    ~
    I’m a Human Being

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    LeslieMay commented on I'm a Human Being

    11-18-2009

    Wow. This is totally deep. War poem, I assume? You are quite the writer.

    cottonluv commented on I'm a Human Being

    02-15-2009

    nice pant.good work

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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