I'm on the edge

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  • Lonliness

    I'm on the edge

     I'm on the edge
    I'm looking in
    my lonely heart
    it screams for him
    to catch me.
    I'm falling down
    my tears they fall.
    I hear the echo
    against the wall.
    my heart it breaks
    each step he takes
    away from me. now I see
    that no one loves me
    I'm all alone
    standing here.
    I'm  on the edge.
    I'm falling fast.
    hanging by a single thread
    don't know how long it'll last
    before someone cares
    to hold on to me
    before I let go
    to the world around me
    that had no love for me at all.

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    hilarylane commented on I'm on the edge

    08-10-2009

    I hope things are looking up for you. I can feel your pain through your words...Good poem
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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