Imagination's End

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    Imagination's End

     Our dismal dreams 
    Dissolve 
    From our flat and fragmented Imaginations. 

    Stained dry 
    Drops of dew suggest a soon
    Surrender. 

    Stiff and lonely. 
    Windows coldly wilt, 
    Ignoring the awkward air. 

    And every nocturnal ounce- 
    Even the shadows, 
    Grow shallow. 
    Draining night's desires. 

    Swallowing each star
    And choking on the moon, 
    Daybreak beckons open eyes.

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    Musicmynded1 commented on Imagination's End

    04-20-2012

    maybe....................... daybreak beckons and our eyes open.
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    kpeery09 commented on Imagination's End

    02-26-2010

    *standing inovation* for a wonderful poem, even though you said you want to break this habbit, Im sure you will, but for the while that you still have it and trying to break it keep up the good work.
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    HarverTomsson commented on Imagination's End

    12-04-2009

    I always wondered what a morning person did with insomnia! Well done.
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    BadBadBear commented on Imagination's End

    12-02-2009

    A nicely titled, nicely written work. "Imagination's End" is the ****! Fine write!
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    Kaiprin commented on Imagination's End

    12-02-2009

    I absolutely love this poem. :jealous: I'm feeling a little bit of that actually. Again: great stuff. Keep them coming.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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