Stained

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  • Emotional
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  • Confusion

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    -Rough draft'ish. Comments!

    Stained

     I will always remember
    the belittling scent of your presence,
    and how many times I
    secretly
    took advantage of every embrace
    just to smell the cotton threads of your shirt.
    I will always remember
    the affect of your stagnant smile.

    You were always smiling.

    But will you ever know?
    Will you ever understand
    what your final touch left?

    A lasting mark.
    I will always regret,
    but never forget.

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    sawdust commented on Stained

    05-05-2011

    your poem depicts innocence stolen well written thought out morally reprehenciable stunning to those of us that have never had to go thru it i hope its not true good write
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    dezzyg123

    05/05/2011

    The best poetry is written from experience, unfortunately. I appreciate your comment! Made my day!

    kpeery09 commented on Stained

    02-25-2010

    Very Nice, I can sense the emotions that it leads people into, keep up the good work.
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