Singed Sanity
Standing stilland smiling,
I can pretend to
plight your pity.
Feeding forced forgeries
between this threat,
I regret what happens next.
I shake your shameful hand.
Don't dare dream
that this isn't dramatic.
I still hate you.
Singed Sanity
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Poem Commentary
I threw this together in Bio class!! hahaha. Lame.. idk, comments?!and smiling,
I can pretend to
plight your pity.
Feeding forced forgeries
between this threat,
I regret what happens next.
I shake your shameful hand.
Don't dare dream
that this isn't dramatic.
I still hate you.
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HarverTomsson commented on Singed Sanity
08-04-2012
- I just read your first post to this final one shown. you have simply let your muse get interrupted. Every skill is still there. You just need someone to pass out the M& Ms when you write a dazzler! This one has a dramatic finale, that is hinted at along the way. Don't see the rating system any more, but this one is very good.
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