Immigrant Bucket

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Immigrant Bucket

cobalt eyes, darts of a flycatcher
no one stops her on the street, as if
she's deaf to human vowels, she's
no more than a barn owl or sparrow

salt-urban days churn mosquito-black
she lowers her face, doesn't raise it
to look around. 'invisible Carla' she whispers
no...I won't go back to the shelter

strange voices fill her head
thrasher noises and mean grown ups
startled wings and sharp beaks caw
and echo, the bucket covers her ears

at night these things she knows
stepping backward, lights grow small
nested against a wooden fence
no one sees her under the box

Carla pinches herself one last time
pulls the cardboard over her body
darkness fills the bucket
this is where dead people go

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Phoenix9 commented on Immigrant Bucket

09-20-2009

very well done. it seems we have a third world country within our own country, always have when you think about it, just a little pinch....

devaamido commented on Immigrant Bucket

09-20-2009

This is an excellent high-fidelity picture of many of the societal castoffs that we callously refer to as "homeless" in this country. Do you understand why this woman prefers to live in a cardboard box rather than in a public shelter? Ask her! She'll tell you, & I'll bet what she says will surprise you.

djones commented on Immigrant Bucket

09-20-2009

i like this piece a lot...thank you...it spoke to the fears that many have with aging in america and the low tolerance our society has for the elderly or perhaps the simply unfortunate...after all it is NOT a compassionate society we live in...

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GingerTyme’s Poems (10)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Immigrant Bucket 4
Text Me 2009 1
Papéré en Ville 1
Crawling Through 1
the Truly Insane 1
Ladies By the Roadside 0
Old Man's Lap 2
Child-like Sky 0
Pearl in a Golden Dream 4
Tales Untold 1