Pearl in a Golden Dream

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    Pearl in a Golden Dream

    In the distance, a magic flute softly plays
    like the last verse of a lullaby; and how cloudless
    is the night. A small breeze captures wisps of hair
    as they fall, mixing with tiny tears across raw-ish cheeks.

    Nothing is as planned, yet everything has a beginning
    somewhere, like the whisper of something rare,
    yet never fulfilled. So travel the notes of the flute
    overtaken by a restless sea, underneath the image
    of a shattered moon;

    and if it had not been for an empty sky,
    never would I have seen visions of a broken smile;
    and if had not been for the taste of salty tears,
    never would I have mistaken a painful kiss
    for the pearl in a golden dream.

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    Beetle726 commented on Pearl in a Golden Dream

    11-30-2009

    Nice! You see through others. You've tasted those salty tears and reality was a sham. Life, love as the sea, has high tides and low. The gentle music that flows over this work, put me into the scenes on the shore. Well done!

    devaamido commented on Pearl in a Golden Dream

    09-20-2009

    But wouldn't we all be bored out of our gourds if we always got what we thought we wanted? Only those who've tasted salty tears really appreciate a shattered moon.

    knight4696 commented on Pearl in a Golden Dream

    09-20-2009

    Great work Ginger- Very nicely writtin - the imagery is so tangible.

    GingerTyme

    09/20/2009

    hi knight, i'll be checking you out soon. bye for now. stay in touch.

    RonicaLeigh commented on Pearl in a Golden Dream

    09-20-2009

    I love this poem . It is beautifully written and speaks to my inner soul.

    GingerTyme

    09/20/2009

    hi ronica, this is cheryl, so far i haven't found anything

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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