In search of my son

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    In search of my son
    JAMES CAMPBELL
    I will look till I die
    N ever making this my last try

    S ad but true
    E xtremly so very blue
    A fter ever try is not you
    R emembering a very hard past
    C aring to try every last task
    H oping my searches will end fast

    O h I pray every day
    F or a way today

    M aking some one say
    Y ou found youre babe

    S o I must remain with
    O pen heart in so much pain
    N ot giving up so I may gain a chance of finding you today



    I FOUND HIM 3-14-10 thanks everyone who prayed it worked

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    WordSlinger commented on In search of my son

    09-24-2009

    Wow, creative, and heartfelt, why I havent seen this last time I was hear beats me, I love this.
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    frostyfries commented on In search of my son

    09-07-2009

    I like this. Especially the way you started and ended it. I hope you find him soon.
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    Taz

    09/07/2009

    Thank you I try every day its nice to know people still read my poems thank you I must read some of youres

    Countrygirl commented on In search of my son

    02-21-2009

    nice wording:)
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    bforibus commented on In search of my son

    02-05-2009

    the same with this one. i loved the flow and the feel espeically the emotion in this one great job.
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    TwistedAce commented on In search of my son

    02-05-2009

    My favorite so far of the 3 i've read. The pain of missing someone so special to you is clearly evident throughout the entire body of work. The Acronym-like way you write your poems is unique and refreshing. I hope you do find your son.... good luck
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