PAINFUL CHANCES & DOUBTS

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PAINFUL CHANCES & DOUBTS

They say silly mortals what fools they be.
I say silly lover Im the fool that believed.

They say he loves me he loves me not.
I say he hates me he hates me not.

Once again I wonder does he or does he not.
Once he said I do but does he really.

Or is this one more painful mistake that is just killing.
There is a sadness in saying I'm sorry,when behind I'm
sorry comes may I have another chance.I search through all
my hate and dismay to seek one more chance with such severe
pain.Should I be like a machine and run out or maybe like a guard
and just watch out.Or may be just be me and get the fxxx out.
I cant find another chance with all my doubts.

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kdavidscott1 commented on PAINFUL CHANCES & DOUBTS

05-16-2009

I think we all question our situations with pains and doubts but the answer comes with patience and understanding that things is always based on a chance. Much love, KD

AIXA commented on PAINFUL CHANCES & DOUBTS

03-23-2009

All related to this poem is certainly true. People in all kind of pain are experiencing doubts in their thoughts.

WordSlinger commented on PAINFUL CHANCES & DOUBTS

03-23-2009

I hear ya, I know the feeling

dahlusion commented on PAINFUL CHANCES & DOUBTS

03-09-2009

This is a perfectly honest write in beautiful poetic verse. Bravo!

cottonluv commented on PAINFUL CHANCES & DOUBTS

03-06-2009

nice work good poem

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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