Invisible

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    Invisible
    When I am invisible...
    there is nothing to see...
    When I am invisible...
    there is nothing to me...
    When I am invisible...
    there is no pain...
    When I am invisible...
    I have no shame...
    When I am invisible...
    there is no light or dark...
    When I am invisible...
    When I am invisible...
    I cringe and cower...
    When I am invisible...
    I have all the power...
    When I am invisible...
    I know where I am...
    When I am invisible...
    I am less than a man...
    When I am invisible...
    I see the pain on your face...
    When I am invisible...
    I know my place...
    when...
    I...
    am...
    INVISIBLE

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    Browerlady commented on Invisible

    05-13-2009

    I was ok, but it was not one of your better ones. All of the other ones I could feel them deep inside when I read them. This one just skimmed the surface.
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    Kagome13 commented on Invisible

    05-09-2009

    good
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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