Behind My Mask

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  • Sadness

    Behind My Mask
    behind my mask...
    I'm still flesh...
    I still breathe...
    I still bleed...
    for you...
    I still cry...
    for you...
    that's just how it is...
    inside I break...
    outside, I am held together by metal...
    maybe I shouldn't say any of this...
    because my words are...

    h.o.l.l.o.w
    b.r.o.k.e.n
    e.m.p.t.y


    my mind still races...
    my emotions still swirl...
    my pulse still quickens...
    behind my mask...

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    am2anangel commented on Behind My Mask

    05-23-2009

    excellent poem you can feel the pain of a lost love through your words. What I get from this is that maybe on the outside you hide how you really feel but on the inside the pain is still there.
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    lois2lane245 commented on Behind My Mask

    05-18-2009

    great poem wonderful i feel every word
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