Judgments

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    Judgments


    What would people say if I took this knife and silently slipped away,
    Without a second thought or goodbye.
    What would people say if I never woke up one day,
    Without leaving a note or giving a reason.
    What would people say if I were swinging from a tree,
    Without joy but in silence.
    What would people say if I slowly faded away,
    Without hope of ever coming back.
    What would people say if I took my life slowly leaving the proof all over my body,
    Without a care about what people say.
    What would people say if I said what is there left to live for if everything is too good to be true.

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    XxshatteredxX commented on Judgments

    05-21-2009

    i love this poem holly!! its very dark and emotional but it is so intense. my favorite line is the last one, "what would people say if i said what is there left to live for if everything is too good to be true."

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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