Lighthouse

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    Lighthouse

    Lighthouse
    01-16-09


    I see you there beyond the willow tree,
    The chilled breeze whisping around you.
    I’m looking past you but cannot see,
    The fog is thick with morning dew.

    We’re standing here in the middle of it all,
    You and I in this emptiness.
    Our veins hardening from the presence of fall,
    Hearts weighing heavy with their solidness.

    The clouds gather in rage from being ignored,
    They will join forces with the ocean beside.
    The giant swirling and breaking against a diligent shore,
    The rocks remain still with nowhere to hide.

    A powerful event is about to begin,
    A vigilant vortex swallowing all in its path.
    Wrenching it is to see your end,
    As your heart turns, it will be the last.

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    kym commented on Lighthouse

    05-17-2009

    wow that was so amazing it shows so much emotions its great

    kriskardum

    10/26/2009

    thank you, sorry I just saw this reponse. i don't come on here that often.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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