lose your mind with me

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just a fun, goofy song i wrote a few months ago

lose your mind with me

darling wont you lose your mind with me
slip right into sweet insanity
everyones about to flip there lid
so lets turn down the lights and pump up the Id

We could go and paint this whole town red
we could spend the next six weeks in bed
so wont you tell me what its like to be dead
before someone tightens the screws in my head

so baby wont you lose your mind with me
never fit into this society
when they come to take us away you know
well be singing HAHA HEHE HOHO!

We could listen to syd barrett
while dancing around in our straight jackets
if u be my bride ill gladly be your groom
our honeymoon will be in this padded room

Now were startin to live
im feelin so blissfully dissociative

no reason to get psycho dynamic
no reason to be so damn dramatic

cant  you see this madness is being enjoyed
so step aside Mr. Sigmund Freud



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inkmaster commented on lose your mind with me

11-24-2009

nice write ...very creative ...I liked it................................inkmaster

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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