Lost

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though the years my half sister has been very evil and this poem sums her up to a t

Lost

Lost

Trapped inside your hell
Looking for your heaven
Every gate you come upon
Says you're forbidden
With voices ranting in your head
You don't make them stop
You listen very closely
They have planned a plot
Send everyone I know in emotional Distress
Maybe I will bring them down
Enough to show them I'm the best
I'm good at what I do
Trying to beat me makes you a fool
As long as I know
Your in my hell
I know I have found my gate to heaven


written by VBJ

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A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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