love is my name

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    love is my name

    Like a bird in the sky

    I am flying all over the world

    I am here and there and everywhere

    No one knows who I am

    No one knows where I came from

    No one knows how I live

    Or how I cry, laugh or even how I die

    No one knows where I am

    No one knows where I am going

    No one is crying in the night

    Missing me like crazy.

    I am a part of the sky.

    I am a part of the night sky.

    I am a part of the family of stars

    I am brother of the moon

    And my sister is mars.

    Who am I, is that what you ask

    I am the will, the dream and the hope

    That even in the darkest hour

    Is called upon and brought to you

    Here on earth.

    I am the light at the end of the tunnel

    I am the spark that keeps you alive

    I am the song you hear at night

    I am the rainbow that colors the sky

    I am the rain that hides your tears

    I am the words that you left unspoken

    I am the dream you never let go

    I am the thought behind it all

    I am the mercy that you seek

    When you are the most weak

    I am the water in the desert sand

    I am the painting that brought you

    Back to this life

    I am what I am,

    And all that I am is all that

    You will ever need.

    Tell me who am I and what am i

    To someone like you.

     

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    Hampton commented on love is my name

    10-08-2009

    This is a lovely write full of expression and written with good flow and style

    graceladymn commented on love is my name

    09-24-2009

    Beautiful work in attempt to show the freedom of love, love even exists in prison, it exists in all things and all things come forth from it and return to it no matter the mask it wears. You helped us the reader to feel it in your word movements, expressed in ways easily understood. Easy to leave your page feeling good about love, giving it room to fill itself out. Thank you, an inspiring work.

    WordSlinger commented on love is my name

    09-23-2009

    Awesome, I really like this, great idea, every line is cool. :)

    DeepEclipse commented on love is my name

    09-23-2009

    I like the repetiveness. Each striking with different images. Sometimes repetiveness can dull a poem but I find it works well here. I like how you related the images to love itself, through metaphorical connections.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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