Love so Deep

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    Love so Deep

    If she only knew

    The pain she caused

    When she played with my heart

    She played the game until she was left on top

    Not knowing I was actually falling for her

    She has the perfect personality that I love to be around

    And the perfect smile I wish I had

    I'm gone from your life without letting you know

    How much you really mean to me

    Your'e my world,

    You're my everything,

    I just wish you would see

    That you mean so much to me

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    Teardrops commented on Love so Deep

    12-23-2009

    smiple and to the point good read and great flow

    Gibbz commented on Love so Deep

    12-23-2009

    i liked it. it was good. um u explained everything nicely....

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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