Love vs. Obsession

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    Love vs. Obsession

    i'll do more for u cause i care more for u than i do for myself so i'll give u more help. yes i'll give u my all and i'll have a ball doing it while i rip through my life like a cannon ball ruins shit. i'll buy more for u and i'll try more for u till i end up with nothing and i'll cry more for u.

    since the first night we met
    since the second i saw u
    i knew that i'd love u
    compliment and applaud u
    i'd make u feel special
    each kiss would mean something
    everything would be perfect
    i guess daydreams r dumb things
    cause they never come true
    thats the problem with wishing
    see what matters is work
    forthrightness and listening
    and saying the right thing
    and shutting up when u cant
    sharing kisses at red lights
    in the car holding hands
    it gets me higher than drugs do
    every time that i hug u
    been in it for life
    since we first said 'i love u'
    since we first dreamed of 'i do's'
    wedding dresses and babies
    i started thanking the stars
    and the world that made me

    still i'll do more for cause i care more for u than i do for myself so i'll give u more help. yes i'll give u my all and still have a ball doing it while i pour out my soul like a thunderstorm ruins shit. i've bought more for u and i've taught more to u, i've done all i can still theres a lot more to do.

    those 'i do's' we dreamed of?
    well now theyre real life
    ima give u the world girl
    ima make u my wife
    ima make u a queen
    and ima learn to be king
    i can teach u some chords
    and u can teach me to sing
    and teach me to laugh
    i wanna learn how to smile
    and i can teach u to grieve
    in a way thats worth while
    and we'll kick the worlds ass
    and we'll love every minute
    like a hollywood romance
    like we're already in it
    like the world is our stange
    and everyday is our show
    we wont need a script cause
    we'll just say as we go
    we'll improv our lives
    aint no time for rehearsal
    cause we ran out back then
    and im wondering why does it hurt still?

    its cause i'll say more for u or i'll pray more for u than i will for myself i'll flip my heaven to hell just to give u my all yeah i had a ball doing it u think i'd hand u my heart? i think i've already proven it cause i bought more for u i did a lot more for u until i fell down defeated cause i fought more for u 

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    leigh14 commented on Love vs. Obsession

    12-01-2010

    i love it hun ^_^ a ten from me.... :DD miss ya! talk at me later love ya!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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