Mindless

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    Mindless

     My humor has been worn away.
    And patience strained most everyday.
    The feelings lost that can't be found.
    They passed away without a sound.

    I think that I'll unplug my brain.
    So my thoughts won't make me go insane.
    Then I can be numb and have no fears.
    And won't feel the need to shed those tears.

    Take all the emotions and lock them away.
    Then I won't care what others say.
    All words would be hollow and all be the same.
    Equal to water that flows down a drain.

    There would be no more life in a hollowed out shell.
    Without a mind you don't know your in hell.
    So if I could do this it might just be best.
    Instead of acting like I'm not depressed.

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    ListninEar commented on Mindless

    11-16-2009

    I am so glad that you are sharing your poetry online so the world can see. I'd so like to share it with some of the clients I work with. So many can relate!
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    RonicaLeigh

    11/16/2009

    Please feel free to share anything I've written with someone you think it might help. I wrote these things for myself. And a friend encouraged me to share them with others.

    Kaleidoscope commented on Mindless

    11-16-2009

    So far my fav of your poems.. Don't walk on eggshells for anyone.. you are a human being and deserve to be treated as so good job
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    RonicaLeigh

    11/16/2009

    Thank you again. This was what I wrote after my long ordeal with physical pain, and all the pain meds I was taking. When I stopped taking them , then I had to deal with the real things and wished for the mindless bliss of being numb.

    Kyranna commented on Mindless

    09-14-2009

    great work. i feel like this sometimes. i sometimes wish i could not feel anything to the pain i feel wont be anything anymore.
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    RonicaLeigh

    11/16/2009

    Being on pain meds for long periods of time made this one easy to write, But it is no way to deal with life in general.

    Sydney commented on Mindless

    09-09-2009

    this is really good. i know what you mean about not feeling anything.
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    RonicaLeigh

    11/16/2009

    Being on pain meds for long periods of time made this one easy to write,

    Sufie commented on Mindless

    09-09-2009

    For sure, the poem displays a human side, of which one becomes aware one day or the other. I think being aware of the negative side , always helps you to get on the positive one.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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