Mobius Strip
In & out of timeIn and out of space
Follow the road
Thatv always lead to home.
Mobius Strip
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Tags: Thought Provoking , Gothic
In and out of space
Follow the road
Thatv always lead to home.
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Chaos128 commented on Mobius Strip
12-03-2009
- The concept is quick, but the journey is likely to be less expedient, because though the road must eventually lead home, you’ve got no guarantee on how long it’s going to take…Ahh, I guess that would be where the “In and out of time” twist comes in. Cute!
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AIXA commented on Mobius Strip
06-07-2009
- Short but direct. We always travel and go everywhere, but the end of the road, is going back home, going always there.
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