My Angel

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    My Angel

    Crawl into my sanctuary
    And leave this world behind.
    Open your heart and let me in,
    Then close the door to your mind.

    Wrap yourself in my blanket,
    As dark as the ocean deep.
    Your tears gently sparkle,
    Like diamonds while you weep.

    I will hold you tightly,
    Protect you from all that is wrong.
    And when you long for comfort
    I will bring you a Phoenix' song.

    Don't cry my flightless angel,
    Your halo still shines bright.
    Together we will find your wings
    And soon you will be in flight.

    So tonight, please be peaceful,
    I know you are feeling weary.
    So rest, wrapped up in my blanket,
    Inside my sanctuary

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    RKCHOWDARY11 commented on My Angel

    02-20-2011

    Excellent write with heavy feeling and assured hope poised in beautiful words. Amazing indeed. R K Chowdary

    musipity31 commented on My Angel

    03-03-2010

    i like your indearing style of expressing your inner self.

    Tempestlady commented on My Angel

    02-28-2010

    Beautifully done...Write on and remember what you were thinking when you wrote this one... Nice rhythm, and wonderful rhyme.....

    Waterwizard2005 commented on My Angel

    01-26-2010

    I like the words and the rhyming. This poem is my favorite I've found so far. Very nice.

    Duke2ann commented on My Angel

    11-28-2009

    Awesome poem! I love the way it flows, it's so comforting. It's so beautiful...thank you for sharing.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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