Rose's two

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    Rose's two

    Rose are red

    My heart is blue

    But no one can take the place of you

    I lye here all alone

    and here all the crying moans

    as i look in foam

    I see that you are not alone

    You cry for me to die

    But yet you are to shy

    For the one you love

    For the ones you care for

    For the all be behind the door



    I love so many but cant be greedy

    For everyone is needie....

    This is my own from what i feel

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    rollerderby commented on Rose's two

    12-06-2008

    nice poem my dear, though the rhyme scheme started out well you let it slip away just a little toward the end. The overall story is sad but you are young and there is a lot of life yet to experience. Well done!

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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