You Hurt Me

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You Hurt Me

You hurt me
tore me apart
then what, you just left
left me there alone, in pain
cold metal on my throat
you whispering in my ear
"if you dont shut up..."
a pain, one never forgotten
that night, i was changed
You made that change
I still have nightmares
reliving that night in my dreams
Cant touch my neck
Cant kiss my neck
You, you monster, have ruined me for life
When ever im with the one i love
Memories of that night come back
Scared that she might turn it to You
You took the one thing that i could give away
and i know that your still out there
waiting...

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Wrighter commented on You Hurt Me

08-31-2009

YOU REALLY KNOW WHAT A WOMAN THAT LIVING WITH A MAN THAT IS A MONSTER, IS FEELING. IN THIS POEM...I CAN ALSO FEEL WHAT YOU ARE FEELING....BEAUTIFULL !

Plot121 commented on You Hurt Me

11-21-2008

I understand the what your trying to say here but I think because you had quite a few ideas collide at once I think the whole thing could be tighten up. It was a good atempt but I think you need to stay with just a few plot lines and stay with them.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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