My family is no part of me

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  • Childhood

    My family is no part of me
    A young girl left to mourn her mother, back stabbed by her own brother.
    The anger I feel inside, the ones I trust kicked me to the side
    A family full of money hungry lives, a grandfather who could care less if I was alive
    Green money was all the family seen, turning their backs and being dirty instead of clean.
    You damn right, I own the rights to be MEAN
    I pretend I don't have family, and forget they even exist
    Because deep inside when they come around I'm pissed
    This all should probably be in my past, it should be all good instead of bad
    But the family can kiss my three letters, because God made me better, better than them I should believe
    It's sad to say My family is no part of me

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    monae commented on My family is no part of me

    09-21-2010

    i agree,, 2 h3ll with 3m.. but evn tho dey hv3 hurt yew.. & wasnt dere 4 yew.. yew gotta l3arn 2 l3t go & l3t God wk it out 4 yew!*
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    LBoogie commented on My family is no part of me

    11-16-2009

    Mommy I feel your pain but you have got to learn how to forgive, so it can free you. good write
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    Ceasar commented on My family is no part of me

    11-04-2009

    Oh yeah-I almost forgot to mention-as individuals, we must fight hard to let no one steal our joy. Also, I would like to see a pic posted on this site of you smiling, because you are to beautiful not to be smiling. It's okay to smile-let down your guards-not everyone is out to harm you. Take care beautiful :) !
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    Ceasar commented on My family is no part of me

    11-04-2009

    Wo--o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-w. Very well written and very touching. Lol, you almost made me cry reading this. If this poem is based on true happenings, then I encourage you to keep ya head up, keep believing-in yourself, as well as God. Remember what the word says, a mans (person's) enemy is of his (their) own household.
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    cmlestrade commented on My family is no part of me

    08-02-2009

    Very turbulent ride on this emotional piece. get the feeling it is almost an unresolved emotion. A good treatment of seething anger.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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