My own Paradise (i left)

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    My own Paradise (i left)

    When the thunder booms and the lightning blasts,
    that's my paradise.
    When the rain floods and the wind howls,
    that's my paradise.
    my paradise is his pet pieve and his pet pieve is my paradise.
    we are different, and that is why i left. she was right for him, i am not.

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    BDIsernhagen commented on My own Paradise (i left)

    06-05-2009

    True, simple, no hard feelings. It's nice it ended that way, being the victim of the opposite. thanks for posting

    lonewolf commented on My own Paradise (i left)

    04-26-2009

    very good poem. sometimes its best to walk away from love.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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