With You

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  • Lost Love

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    a poem dedicated to a boy i liked for a while,
    and now that he is gone i can't get him off of my mind. i hope you enjoy it.

    With You

    Those emerald green eyes,
    your dark black hair.
    Those sometimes blank expressions as you think,
    your happy hugs every now and again.
    Now that you are gone,
    its all i can bear to say.
    With you my world was complete,
    now its woeful and quiet.
    Those happy times,
    even the sad are good memories.
    With you my lips always smiled,
    oh i have almost forgotten how to smile.
    Now all i have left to say,
    i wish i was with you.
    I want to be
    With you.

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    Hanna commented on With You

    07-03-2009

    when we wish upon a star- love lost is painful. You make me wonder where is he now- does he know the impact he gad on u??

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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