My Rainbow

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My Rainbow

My rainbow
My lifeline
A sign from God
A spiritual sight
so high
Colors breaking up the sky
Makes me ponder
Wonder if there is something more,
more wonderful out my door
Can only be touched
when I close my eyes
Seems to grow brighter
with each aw and sigh
A hopeful sign
above the trees
Something from nature
just for me
A lens of wisdom
A Dream

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wildpendigus commented on My Rainbow

07-01-2009

I like the beggining the way it started out also the title, It would be a good ballad Rock song and I really like content the meaning of your wordsI think you are talented in expressing what you're trying to say you paint a picture well! Good Luck! grecowong@yahoo.com

WordSlinger commented on My Rainbow

06-26-2009

This is my second read of yours, and I'm impressed. I like how you bust this world up, and let the reader have it, what a new poet to the site.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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