MY SACRIFICE

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     this was my lonliest period. Its was a dark & sad time for me. But it builds & tells a story of a love lost, A journey taken

    MY SACRIFICE

      My days are cold, My nights like ice, For the Love I bleed, I sacrifice. Inside Of me, I feel the strain, In my Heart, I feel the Pain. My life has Always been this way.. And In the End, I deeply Pray. I fight for love. & die once more.. My heart is Torn, My Soul is Sore. I cry each night till i fall asleep.. I long for love, Pure & deep. Love's Flame Burns bright, within My heart, And in my soul, love plays a part. I need love's light to find my way.. Beside my love i wish to stay. But Frozen here without Love's Embrace.. I wish to hide my tear stained face. The shadows grow, & wrap around, Quietly sneaking, without a sound. within this wasteland.. I am found. My Prison grows, The air is chill, Its light & love my soul must Feel. Banish the cold & frozen me.... So that we may both live.... happily.
    T.C

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    kdarcy commented on MY SACRIFICE

    12-05-2009

    A little jumbled, but the emotion and feelings are very evident. Find the love you so desire, or let it find you and hold you. be well, k

    poet4dasoul commented on MY SACRIFICE

    07-13-2009

    I really like the resilience inbetween the lines in this one. this is a poem that admits of being tired of the bulls--t, and I give you a thumbs up for surviving. thanks for that one.

    cliftondurant commented on MY SACRIFICE

    06-29-2009

    I iove this poem great emotion express and your desire for love

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