Oh, Atlanta

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    Oh, Atlanta

    This has been surreal, to say the least
    The past four years in the city they call
    "The Peach of the South" have been a roller coaster
    However, its better compared to one of those rides
    where the to and fro movements are simulated.

    I have been the solitary rider strapped in,
    buckled down, checked and re-checked
    by the acne stricken high school student
    who spills out a memorized cheesy intro
    (that he has apparently recited a thousand times)
    before he shuts me in and the lights go dim.
    The teenager then presses the start button
    then dashes for the exit for a quick smoke.

    I make this attraction the poetic representation
    of my truly "magical" experiences, dark or otherwise,
    because during the thrill ride the ascents and descents
    were merely illusions created by an autonomic machine
    Man made to fool the mind with smoke and mirrors.
    I never had the celebrated ups in reality even though
    by keeping my eyes glued to the monitor,
    I felt as if I were actually traveling upward.
    Logic and common sense has taught me well
    that I haven't left the secure comforts of the ground
    Nor have I gone outside the enclosure of the ride
    that begins to close in on me, maybe part of the show?
    Tighter and tighter, its getting very difficult to breathe.

    I realize that no one else is to blame
    for the wasted ticket I purchased outside the gate
    or for the wasted time I obviously spent
    strolling through the line that ended up being a maze,
    an intricate and endless maze winding for miles.
    The funny thing is I should have known better.
    While traversing through the path of velvet ropes,
    I saw I was the only patron silly enough to attend.

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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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