PAINFUL LOSSES

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PAINFUL LOSSES


A loss most times,
Calls for a reflection;
On whom we are,
Or whatever we can become.
It’s a lot more than the loss
but an insight into the depth,
for its course fully run.
Above the shadows,
It could be a call for echoes
That is never seen.
Indeed hard to believe,
that a slamming door
On a great opportunity
Could be too great a price,
to be paid for being who you are.
Stares of past woes,
Shadows of the present
Hypocrisies not shown.
Pants of the ‘fear of loss’ so terrible
Phony but true, in deep pains.
Tears streams so lonely
Unfolds regrets in its scores;
On what you should have been,
Denied, and never to be.

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famous commented on PAINFUL LOSSES

04-27-2009

Really hits the nail on the head!! Loss is difficult and through it we grow and are never the same

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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