Struggles

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    • Val
    • The real beauty of the heart is in the imagery displayed in words

    Struggles

    In full Glimpses
    A trying wail escapes.
    Beats the mortal into a shape,
    never seen, never visioned
    Clogged up, a blabber,
    piercing unto the times not known,
    though with claims clear and decisive
    All vain in so much sweat.

    Human slides can see through,
    beyond those claims,
    only to break apiece...
    A word for years innumerable
    true all seasons and beyond
    fit for the blazzers, unfit in the puzzle,
    yet the one thing needed to be
    that the real you cannot.

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    Phoenix9 commented on Struggles

    10-06-2009

    gvery well done, you show great talent and your pen paints a true message

    famous commented on Struggles

    04-27-2009

    I agree it is metaphorically ideal! Keep writing you have a gift!

    bforibus commented on Struggles

    01-21-2009

    this poem was so metaphoricaly perfect i cant believe someone voted this so low. u must of lost them

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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