"Iris Sunrise"

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This was the first song in the three part star saga.. It was born around March 2008 in Woodbridge, Va.

"Iris Sunrise"

"Iris Sunrise"

Verse 1:
Just like the sunrise
Illiminantes the night sky
This is the brightness in your eyes.
My sweet flower in bloom-
Occupying all the room -
and stoking the fire in my heart.
The color scheme of things-
The star of my dreams-
A precious bird in midst of flight.

Pre Chorus:
Cant say I haven't been
Wondering when
You'd let me in
to touch your skin...

Chorus:
Darling,
 the wait is killing me.
Darling,
 my state is killing me..


Verse 2:
If you take me in your wings-
I promise that I'd sing-
The sweetest song I'd ever write..
You never fail to set the mood-
It's like you always knew-
You'd sneak me out of here alive..
The heat I feel from you -
Your flames, they burn so blue.
Nothing could convince me otherwise.

Pre- Chorus:
Cant say I haven't been
wondering when
You'd let me in
to touch your skin...

Chorus:
Darling,
 my dreams are killing me.
Darling,
 The dreams are filling me...

Outro:
Megan..
Iris sunrise....

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BDIsernhagen commented on "Iris Sunrise"

06-06-2009

wonderful...one lucky lady she is! I like the first bit, about the sunrise in her eyes, and as one who writes songs and poems, I know the difficulty there is in it, and appriciate what you have done here.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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