Racing for Love

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Racing for Love

Tryna find a solution to this problem,

i can't seem to get around it,

its like my mind is stuck on ponder,

i follow you around like yuu ariel an i'm flounder,

but that's sum disney ish,

i'm not on no kiddy shit,

oops, i'm sorry please excuse my french,

but i just thought you needed to know this,

like i just had to get this of my chest,

it felt like i was weighed down by a 20 pound bullet proof vest,

but you got past it, how did this happen?

cupid shot his arrow, an my heart is where it landed

an you stole my heart like a bandit,

the way i feel isn't normal, i just can't stand it,

an everytime i see you my heart skips a beat,

i start to stumble like i was born with two left feet

i'm racing for your love, but there are others in this race

i'm gettin tired of runnin, i can't keep up with their pace

but i can't stop, won't stop, i'm in second place

i'm nearing the finish line an i see your lovely face

i'm pushin too the front, i'm almost at the finish

i'm getting excited, i think i might win this

i get a busrt of energy, my adrenaline's flowing

i can't slow down, i gotta keep going

i pass up the others, i beat the competition

i reach the goal first, i finally finished

but what i see i just can't understand,

who is that guy and why are you holding his hand?

i'm so confused, i have to ask why

she says,"you finished a little late, this is goodbye"

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PoeticInfluence commented on Racing for Love

02-19-2010

thank you!...lol i try

blueberry commented on Racing for Love

02-18-2010

Awesome poem! A very amusing way of describing a race for love.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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