Recubo

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Recubo

Your eyes,
Are filled with lies,
Your deceptions make me cry,
How could you sit there and lie,
I know what you've done,
Your infidelity has come and gone,
Don't tell me I'm wrong,
I'm sitting here trying to be strong,
I can't believe you've been playing me all along,
I don't know how much more i can take,
I can't sit here and let my heart ache,
I can't be with someone that acts so fake,
Get away from me,
I'm about to break,
My hand is starting to shake,
the gun goes off,
I throw your body in the lake,
You were a mistake!

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rossmangeles commented on Recubo

06-30-2009

Your poem is simply so great. I love it. I love the message, the rhyme and the choice of words. Keep it up! Cheers! I think that you are naturally sweet, but don't throw the body in the lake even though he was a mistake.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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