Remedy for a dream

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Remedy for a dream

She woke me this morning, early
"Mommy, Mommy, Mommy!"
Sobbing and frightened from a nightmare
I rushed in to see what was wrong
Holding her anguished little body
She shook and cried while I rocked her
Needing far more comfort than a few words
I took her back into my room
Holding her small hand and smoothing her damp brow
She snuggled close beside me
Sharing my pillow, breathing slowing down
I marveled that I was the one she ran to for comfort
This sweet little child of mine.

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bandit1192 commented on Remedy for a dream

09-08-2009

I remember those times. Right after their mom left and I was all they had. I learned quickly, the most important thing I could do was let them know I was there and would never leave. Good poem, TS

danmartyjake1 commented on Remedy for a dream

09-03-2009

This is a sweet and loving piece that I enjoyed. i have felt these same emotions as I comforted my son in the night. Thanks for sharing.

photochick commented on Remedy for a dream

09-02-2009

this is very sweet great job with painting a picture for the reader great imagery i look forward to reading more of your poems keep up the great writing

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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