Retake That Pul-eeze!!

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social diseases and disorder.....

Retake That Pul-eeze!!

Just remember I will always love you.
What the hell is this a movie script?
Using lines like your some bullshit actor.
You need to unplug your face from those screens and get a STD test.
And what about those babies you made but don't care for?
Oh how you love them "hoes" but don't like being called a whore.
But anyway there's no such thing today we are all just sexually free.
Got to be all you can be with your filthy expressions.
And all you can be is just sick. Gone too far to turn back.
And once your lost for good and your pride can't even be located.     
Maybe, just maybe, you'll think twice.
The reality show you be livin' ain't nothin' nice.
I hope you get a clue before it's too late.
Because once your show is over there will be no retakes for you.
Viewer Beware.

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If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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