Reverie

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Reverie

Sing to the red clouds:
Brilliant heart to a summer sunset
Skipping along the boards
Of a long-forgotten path.
A warm breeze sneaks inside my head
Turning my wayward heart
Towards rescue.
Like a lost helium balloon,
I rise higher and higher
Till I am no longer visible
To beings earthbound;
Closer than ever to the silver moon
Of a stark night.
Stars erased by the man-made lights
Of the pier'
Commanding attention beyond
The short-lived thrills of the rides.
I am enfolded in the damp breeze
And wonder what I could have been
Elsewhere, elsetime
Stripped of the longing
For us.

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kmooney commented on Reverie

09-14-2009

Another wonderful piece. You seem to write effortlessly. I love how you words just seem to flow. Terrific cadence and tempo. A very good poem. Thanks again... Kevin.

MrGee commented on Reverie

08-12-2009

EXCELLENT ! Of course my standards are high but obviously this poem is a 10

scrye commented on Reverie

08-12-2009

Quite a wonderful trip you just took me on with the words, your imagery is well done. Thanks for posting for us here to read and enjoy. I will always be happy to read. Great job on this one.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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