See what she could be

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    • I'm currently turning my poems into songs. A little re-writing here and there. Would be grateful to find someone who can write music. If anyone knows someone who can write music or who can sing, send them my way.

    See what she could be

     I saw all the great things
    She could of been
    At times at night
    I'd stare at her and grin
    I believed in her
    No matter what other people would say
    If I felt lost
    She would show me the way
    But others conviced her differently
    They were stronger then me
    I am sadden that she couldn't
    See what she could be

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    connsk8 commented on See what she could be

    06-21-2009

    Sad that your optimism wasn't enough, I like happy endings, sweet poem nevertheless, I don't think you should give up, she needs you..
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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