shadow man

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    shadow man

    there was a faceles man, who walked the shadows of my dreams,
    never actually taking part, taking notes was how it seemed,
    he didn't play villian or hero, events just slipped right past,
    nothing ever touched him, he was objective to the last,
    i hadn't seen him clearly, his face was always blurred,
    i wouldn't recognize his voice, because he never said a word,
    he has always been there in my dreams, it never felt like a choice,
    until we met, you and i, now he talks to me with your voice,
    in my dreams he still walks, but know he looks like you,
    when he talks i hear your voice, he feels just like you too,
    yeah sometimes he's the bad guy now, the one who makes me cry,
    and he's been the villian in my dreams, where i know he tells me lies,
    but now and then he's my hero too, noble brave and strong,
    he's right there beside to remind me where i belong,
    he's the guy who makes me angry, then he makes me glad,
    he makes me smile pissed me off, makes me nervous, happy, sad,
    he's the one who owns me, heart, body, mind, and soul,
    he makes me wait, he makes me late, but still he makes me whole,
    he's the one i'm most afraid of, even as he's keeping guard,
    he's what my true loves made of, he holds all the cards,
    he's the one i live for, and yes, i'd die for too,
    he wears me down, he builds me up, he tells me what to do,
    we've never been that close, who knows what trouble that would bring,
    he's way to full of contradictiong, and he's still my EVERYTHING.

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    dragynwynd commented on shadow man

    06-03-2009

    Very, very good....imagery, words, all well done. It speaks to me and makes me feel. Bravo.....dragynwynd

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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