She doesn't see

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    She doesn't see

    She doesn't see what her friends see,
    Her friends see her as beautiful and full of grace,
    She sees an ugly girl who couldn't be more of a klutz if she tried
    Through her life and actions they see her love for the Lord,
    She's always asking for God's forgiveness
    for not being the faithful servant she needs to be.
    Her parents love her very much, however all she feels is constant fighting and arguing.
    Everyone around her loves her but all that she ever feels is
    hatred,
    and anger.
    She doesn't see what her friends see!

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    brokenhearted11 commented on She doesn't see

    07-11-2010

    good work, all in all a bit above average. i say 6.5 but ill cal it 7 :) keep writing :)

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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