Silver Moon

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    • Pam44
    • Waiting for creativity to strike!!

    Poem Commentary

         My very first poem!
         I was sitting in a car with my mom, waiting for my dad and brother. I got bored and grabbed a pencil and paper and started writing down words. I didn't know what i was doing until i actually read it.
         At that moment, i fell in love with writing and poetry. I thought it was so beautiful that people would pour their emotion and soul onto paper.
         I guess this poem was just an accident. But what a beautiful accident it is.
         haha XP

    Silver Moon

     Under a beautiful silver moon
    That's where my love will stay
    I think about it every sad afternoon
    And every night I'll pray
    That our love will always be
    And won't disappear for all eternity.
    I'll savor every single moment when we are together
    So in my memory it will stay forever
    Every time when i look up at the silver moon
    I hope I'll get to see you soon
    Even though i may not be holding your hand
    Remember, I'll be running back to you
    Wherever you may stand.

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    aubrey commented on Silver Moon

    07-08-2009

    Again very nice, I really enjoyed your writing and hope you will write many more.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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