What is Love

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         I usually have no one to inspire me about the poem while writing it. I would just write with no intention and hope for the best. When finished with a poem, and if it's good, I would think about who i should dedicate it to.
         But this one, I knew who I was writing for. Knew what it would be about. And poured my heart into it.
         This is actually my first love poem!

    What is Love

     What is it like to be in love?
    Is it like something from above?
    When your heart flutter?
    Makes you feell like butter?

    When i'm in love
    I see pretty white doves

    My heart starts beating
    And i'm barely breathing

    I would count the minutes that pass
    And hope this moment would last

    I want to kiss your lips
    The thing that i miss

    Staying up late at night
    Holding your hand really tight

    I like this feeling
    It's like I'm finally healing

    From the aches and pains
    The things that stains

    I want this moment to last
    Don't want it to fly by too fast

    Do you know what i really want to do?
    I want to say I LOVE YOU TOO

    - <3

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    aubrey commented on What is Love

    07-08-2009

    very nice, I really enjoyed your writing and hope you will write many more.
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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