SIN TI ( WITHOUT YOU)

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    I'm trying my hand in spanish...If there is spanish speaking ppl here let me know how I can improve this..

    SIN TI ( WITHOUT YOU)

    Eres mi vida no quiero vivir sin ti
    dime lo que quieres 
    me haces falta sin ti
    toda las dias contigo me hace feliz 
    Eres el luz de mi vida
    nunca quiero vivir un minuto sin ti 

    You are my life , I don't want to live without you
    Just tell me what you want
    I'm missing something without you
    Every day is happy with you
    You are the light of my life
    I never want to live one minute without you..

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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    POETICJUSTICE78’s Poems (14)

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    THIS FUCKER 2
    SIN TI ( WITHOUT YOU) 0
    Someone like you 1
    REVENGE 0
    Fixed Idea 1
    Spin-off to Addicted 3
    OVER AND OVER 0
    FOR SO LONG 2
    TRIFLIN 1
    ADDICTED 3
    GROW UP.. 0
    BLESSED 1
    CRUSH 1
    STUCK ON STUPID -2