Someone like you

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Someone like you

You have those same eyes of someone I know
I used to love some who looks like you
He had your eyes but he was caring
He had your hands but he knew how to touch me
He had your mouth but didn't say unkind words
I had his last name and he had my heart
you certainly look the part
He had spirit and ambition and you have anger and you don't have me

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SEVEN commented on Someone like you

08-10-2009

Whoa for a min I thought u were tawkin bout me but... My eyes seem to be on errry fem mind My hands been on erry fem be....errr a mind....lol My mouf is only unkind when it doesn't get fed U can't have my last name we r wed As for my spirit and ambitions there's I have plenty Now take your pick b4 there won't be any...hehe... Corny?, I know....just to get u smilin @ my silliness... Good write...Kudos

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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