Spin-off to Addicted

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    Spin-off to Addicted

    Your a fool not at all cool, walk around crying help me I dont want to be like this anymore.
    Your so bad off huh you get to do whatever you want with the excuse its cause of my addiction shit sounds as old as the day before.
    You say oops I fell off the wagon oh please help me your my wife thats your job which hits a spot thats sore.
    hell yeah I'm going to talk shit cause while your partying, I'm being a mom and dad to our sons, working extra hard and still poor.
    You make me feel like I'm the one with the problem while last night you left in my car, rockin my cell phone god only knows to do what but I'm supposed to understand it's the addiction you couldn't ignore.
    I hide my money and car keys and that makes you angry well you did this not me, you say "you don't trust me" but the minute I'm dumb enough to leave my money laying around, you jack my shit and head for the door.
    Please baby understand I love you and I'm trying to get my life together for you and my kids and here I am supportive and there for you only to see a week later it isn't true so I think I'll leave you but you always play your cards right where I stick around for more.
    I'm tired of this shit I sure wish  I could hide behind some bullshit like addiction and not take care of my responsibilities I've tried to unconditionaly love you but it is becoming a chore...

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    SEVEN commented on Spin-off to Addicted

    07-15-2009

    Gurl u need to cut him off......As long as he knows ur not gone leave him, he gone continue the bull shit game.....Usin his addiction as an excuse is so low.......its time to let him go...If not....retract ur poem (Stuck on Stupid)....Don't get angry, get gone...

    brayim commented on Spin-off to Addicted

    05-16-2009

    dearie, my English is not very perfect, but will try to comment on ur poem later..

    archdebo commented on Spin-off to Addicted

    04-16-2009

    Girl, I've been there!! You got it on the head....let it out!

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    POETICJUSTICE78’s Poems (14)

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    THIS FUCKER 2
    SIN TI ( WITHOUT YOU) 0
    Someone like you 1
    REVENGE 0
    Fixed Idea 1
    Spin-off to Addicted 3
    OVER AND OVER 0
    FOR SO LONG 2
    TRIFLIN 1
    ADDICTED 3
    GROW UP.. 0
    BLESSED 1
    CRUSH 1
    STUCK ON STUPID -2