Sitting Around

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    Sitting Around
    I sit around.
    I stare at the clouds.
    I see the stars.
    I look around.
    I feel the water come pouring down.
    I sit here thinking of painless thoughts.
    What went on here yesterday?
    Just painless thoughts of today.

    The sun starts to rise.
    I stare off to the horizon.
    I think of how I could have been here that long.

    My body is wet.
    My feet are cold.
    I lived another heartless night.
    Temporarily relief from any fright.
    What went on here yesterday?
    Just painless thoughts of today.

    I sat around.
    I stared at the clouds.
    I saw the stars.
    I looked around.
    I felt the water come pouring down.

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    nini2323 commented on Sitting Around

    02-21-2009

    I really like this one I love the line what happened here yesterday it leaves alot to the imagination and allows the reader to make it personal
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    Nerissie commented on Sitting Around

    02-16-2009

    I enjoyed it and it reminded me of myself.
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    BridgetBowen commented on Sitting Around

    02-16-2009

    Interesting I like it!
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    joanlorraine commented on Sitting Around

    02-16-2009

    NIce write. I liked your other one better.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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