Iron Horse

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    Iron Horse

    It was cold today for an iron horse.
    At first, fingertips numbed... that iron horse.

    Each second passed I felt the cold.
    Iron horse... take control.

    I felt like I was at the movies...
    watching and no control.

    Numb again, this time my mind.
    Iron horse... a bonfire to the cold.

    On the cold road... I will leave it there.
    Iron horse... nothing to fear.


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    FranzJ commented on Iron Horse

    11-29-2009

    i did it once - it was enough for me - nice------------------------

    Connected2u commented on Iron Horse

    03-19-2009

    Spoken like a true rider! I love the ride, the true ride and all it stands for! Great peice.

    Writing4Sanity commented on Iron Horse

    03-16-2009

    fav line - bonfire 2 cold...pic added 2. i'm a rider myself. peace

    EmberRota commented on Iron Horse

    02-16-2009

    for anyone that has rode, this poem speaks wonders of the cold ride....done it a time or two

    bforibus commented on Iron Horse

    02-16-2009

    it was good on analogies and metaphors. it just felt like it didnt have a soul in it. but loved the subject of bitter and lonilness

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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